Vacation in Bali

Me and my family spent our holiday for vacation in Bali. We stayed in Jimbaran Hotel

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for 3 days. We spent our time visited many place such as, Kuta beach, Bedugul, Tanah Lot on the first day. Next day, I went to Besakih and some of department store with my cousin. Because of I was too excited, I lost in crowd. I didn’t know where my cousin was. I was like a fool, walked around and didn’t know the way back to the hotel. Fortunately, I found a children who knew the way back to Jimbaran Hotel. My cousin was so worried about me. On the last day, we bought some handicraft for another my family who didn’t join with us. Most of all, I was so happy, because I can spend my holiday and refreshing time with my family.

My Friend is a Fangirl

     I have a friend in my campus who really likes all about Korean staff. Her name is Tita Monica Timor, who is often called Monic. She likes Super Junior so much. Her favorite member of Super Junior is Cho Kyuhyun. When I opened her laptop, I can see many of Super Junior's pictures or videos, especially about her Kyuhyun. She often buys a magazine or something like that which is full of Super Junior in it. She will scream like a crazy if she watch Super Junior's concert. So, when she talk about Korea or Super Junior with me, I know where the topic will go because I am one of a fangirl too.

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